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> Last draft to the University of Nevada System about releasing the source > for Veronica for public comment:

Just a couple of grammar suggestions to make it look a little more professional:

"are tuning them up currently[,] Jughead in its original [state] and a newly made V2 which emulates Veronica[.] Archie is also being"

"is a goal of many of the members in our community[;] another goal is to"

"[Sincerely,]"

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